Wednesday 22 September 2021
3 spirits
The boss leaned over to jack and told him about 3 spirits.
He made 3 pictures appear on his computer each one showing a different creature.One looks like a zombie and was leaning over a grave. One is made out of pieces of a board game, and has
a giant card for a head. the last One looks like a marionette with two eyes with no pupils and strings attached to all it's limbs.
The boss started to talk about these Monsters are spirits who refused to leave this world. Some of These creatures would leave this world but they can't Jack said why what's keeping them here. Cloud of purple Smoke filled the room as a man wearing nothing but a hood and a mask walked into the building. ‘him’, said the boss, ‘hes the one thats stopping them’
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Kia ora Mace, what a dramatic way to end this piece of writing! The dialogue puts your audience right in the heart of the action. Your descriptions of each of the creatures is complimented by your drawing. I wonder why the masked man is keeping them in this world? Are you going to write more?
ReplyDeleteDo all your stories connect? If they do, perhaps you could make a screencastify and link the stories and images together. blog you later, Megan : )