Once there was a boy who loved outer space. He had made a space astronaut helmet. He loved space jet packs and had a toy rocket plus had a space badge. One day he was walking with his mum to the storeAnd he found a toy rocket she decided to ask his mum for some money so he could play on the rocket. Put on his helmet and was prepared to fly to the moon but his disappointment came when nothing happened. So he decided to start a lemonade stand and save up enough money to go on the rocket ship one more time. He became very oldAnd eventually saved up enough money and put and walked back to the rocket He put all his money in The machine and.Nothing happened he was about to go home but then the rocket Blasted off into space
Kia ora Mace, you've retold the story really well! You showed how persistent the boy was when he saved for so long he grew old. Do you think you could tell this same story but from the boy's point of view? What would he be thinking as he sat at his lemonade stand? What descriptive words could you use as he sat in the rocketship all those years later? blog you again soon, Megan : )
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