Wednesday 22 September 2021
Barry bomb
BOOM a giant explosion goes off in the distance. A figure wearing nothing but bushes walks up to Herald The bushes man said here and picked a red Barry from his back. He threw the Berry at Herald and it started making a Blue Mist. Heralds eyes became droopy and his body became lazy Herald wake up time for school his mum from the other room. Herald got out of his bed but as he was getting dressed he felt something in his pocket he picked it out an red berry.
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Kia ora Mace, What a descriptive story! I like the way you started it with a BOOM, using onomatopoeia really makes your audience take notice. I also like the way you described his body becoming 'droopy' when the berry made a Blue Mist. Are you going to keep writing this story? Who is the bushes man? Was it all a dream? blog you later, Megan : )
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