One day on a Saturday morning Steve was going to buy some milk when he noticed that is front door
didn't look Normal. He opened the door expecting to see his front yard But instead he saw a long dark
corridor and he went through it and and saw another door on the other side. He opened the
second door to find he had traveled back in time to dinosaur times. He walked around for a long long
time eventually finding a T-Rex that was eating his prey. Steve was going to sneak around it but
the T-Rex looked behind himself and saw Steve. It started the chase and Steve and found another door.
He opened and closed it as fast as he could. When he looked behind him he found another dark corridor.
He went through the corridor and came to another door he opened the door and he was in the ocean
without an oxygen tank! "Help!" "Help!" yelled Steve, as luck would have it, he saw another door and
opened it and went inside another dark corridor, While he was looking round the corridor stopped and though
to himself "What if I went backwards, Would that take me back home?" He turned around and walked back
to the door. He opened it and he was finally back at home. He went to the kitchen to have a snack after that
adventure of his but when he returned the door had gone!
Kia ora Mace, this is a really entertaining story. I think time travelling would be amazing but scary (as Steve found out!) Have you ever read Fortunately, The Milk by Neil Gaiman? Your story plays the same kind of games with time. Here is a link to the audiobook, you might like to take a listen.
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Do you think Steve will find the door again? blog you later, Megan : )
Kia ora Mace, this is a great story! The characters are very cool and interesting. Also its good that you added a picture. Maybe next time you could try and keep the writing the same colour because it switches from black to grey. Apart from that this was a great story. Blog you later!
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