One Friday afternoon while walking through the forest John came across a tiny door in a tree stump. John decided to look in the door and turning the tiny door knob, bent over and looked inside and found there were hundreds of little elves. One of the tiny elves looked and saw John outside the door. He walked up to him and said “Hello I am elf number 14, or Fred. Would you like to see our factory.” John nodded his head and said “Yes, please” .The little elf said “come over here”. John replied that he was too big and couldn't fit through the little door. The elf explained “yes you can, just let me do this”, and then he snapped his fingers and poked John on nose and and John shrank down to the size of the elves. Stepping inside the door John saw all kinds of things: chocolate makers, candy canes twirlers, jellybean makers, even a little place to make cards for Go Fish which the elves played in their break times. Fred pulled a jelly bean out of his pockets and gave it to John. Eventually Fred Eventually John had to go, so he waved goodbye and walk outside. Fred snapped his fingers again and poked John in the nose, and John was back to his normal size. And then he went home. the end
Kia ora Mace, thanks for posting your fun story! I like that your elf had a name AND a number. The world you created behind the door made my imagination race, I kept thinking Father Christmas might appear. Do you think the door would still be there if your character made a return visit?
ReplyDeleteNext time, perhaps you could think of a catchy title when you name your blog post. Do you think people might be encouraged to check out your blog if it had a title like "Elf tree discovered" or "A Doorway Opens"? blog you later, Megan : )