One day in a house somewhere a boy was playing video games on the couch. Eventually the boy's mother got home with a huge box. The boy’s mom asked him to go outside. He ignored his mum and went back to playing his game. The boy's mum asked him to open the present she got for him. The boy Slowly opened the present and a puppy jumped out. Cheerfully the dog tried to lick the boy’s face. The boy sees the dog he got as a present is missing a leg so the boy is disappointed. The dog dashes across the room and finds a ball. they he tries to get the boy to play with him the boy decides he wants to play with the dog the end |
Talofa Lava Mace My name is pene and i really like your post because of your words you your post reminds me of the present i did blog you later bye.
ReplyDeleteKia'ora mace Im Miller from RM 25
ReplyDeleteThat's a amazing story maybe you could try to add a bit more writing and some Mor punctuation. That also reminds me of the same vid
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