Chapter 4
Sam and Palat walked through the halls. They walked past a dead tree, flowers and skeletons. Finally they got to Palat’s House. Palat made some dinner for Sam while he played.
“Dinnertime’’ said Palat. Sam sat down at the table. Palat had made some pie for Sam.
"Awesome! What kind of pie is it’’ said Sam
“Banana’’ said Palat
“Of course’’ said Sam.
After dinner Palat offered Sam a bed. Sam went to bed but couldn't sleep. He was too busy thinking about the black hole. Sam was also thinking about Quoork.
Chapter 5
The next day Sam saw some stairs that lead downwards. Sam went down and down and down. At the bottom Sam found Palat.
“I can't have you. Leave child,” said Palat.
“Can I please go past you Palat’’ said Sam.
“No!” Said Palat.
Suddenly Palats flew across the room. There was more than one Palat, more than Sam could count, and they were all aiming at Sam. Sam started to run.
Sam deflected the Palats with his sword. Sam was not going to hurt Palat no matter what she did!
Hi Mace, just read the next few chapters. I like how you have worked on using speech marks correctly. Awesome effort. I now need to know why there are some many Palats? Has she turned evil? Please write the conclusion to the story so I know that Sam makes it out of the underground alive!
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