Underground mission
Chapter 1
Ba tad daum! Sam heard bricks falling down. The black hole was sucking up more and more of Sam’s street. Sam had enough. “That's it! I'm going to go see that stupid king of the underground and see why he is so mad!’’ said Sam. Sam went outside of his house and it wasn't long before the black hole decided to come and get him. Sam started to run.
The black hole got faster and faster. Sam was running so fast he didn't realise he was going to trip. Sam trip on a vine and fell straight into the underground. It was a very long way down and it felt like it took a whole year for him to get there.
Chapter 2
Sam fell down with a bang! Flowers had helped him so he didn't break his bones. Sam had been in the underground before when he planted the flowers in case someone else would fall. A monster appeared. Sam had never seen this monster before. It had a flower for a head, a dragon's tail, a gorilla's body and bird wings with human arms. “Hello, traveller’’ it said with a terrifying smile. Its tail slid across the floor “What would a lonely human like you be doing down here?’’
“I'm going to see your king’’ said Sam.
“I'm going to see your king’’ said Sam.
Chapter 3
The monster glared at Sam “I'm afraid you can't do that’’ the monster said. Quickly the monster threw fireballs and whipped wild vines all over the place. Sam tried to dodge the attacks but they were too fast. A smaller monster came along and took out the first monster who got too damaged so it slid away. The second monster had horns and a cattail. The rest of her body was a monkey’s body. The monster told Sam her name was Palat. “I’m always having trouble with Quoork” she said. She said to Sam, “come to my home and I'll make you some dinner.”
Mace your storys are very creative and cool :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. I hope you liked the new chapters
Deletehi mace this is abi, this is a really great story, I'm so impressed :) and i can't wait to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mace. I really enjoyed reading your short story. You chose descriptive words which helped me, the reader, clearly imagine what each monster looked like. They are very scary! Well done. Teacher Tip: I popped in and edited a few things for you, using the pencil. You can do this also, once you have published if you notice something that you want to change. I am looking forward to finding out what happens next! Keep writing, I am hooked.
ReplyDeleteCool mission,the black hole made it even more interesting.
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